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hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-02-29 12:46 PM

I'm confused about you
I'm confused about me
I'm confused about life
and what its sappose to be

I'm confused about dreams
that are crushed in my sight
I'm confused about tears
and why they fall from these eyes

I'm confused about time
and why it has to fly by
I'm confused about thoughts
that dont leave my mind

I'm confused about love
and if i will get a happy ending
I'm confused about feelings
that i feel when im around you

all this confusion is hurting
my mind
but time will give the
answer to these trials

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-02-29 12:49 PM

when i read this only one word came to my mind "adolesent" lol. i dont know why though. i guess when your growing up you just dont know whats going on. because your learning on whats, what. And thus always being confused.

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-02-29 12:55 PM

really to be honest this is not about me...and that would make sense knowing the person i am writing about

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-02-29 12:39 PM

oh i see so the person your writing about is a adolecent?

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

4 posted 2008-02-29 12:53 PM

yes...but it is about her because she asks and worrys about alot of stuff...but seeing as i wrote it, it probly is a bit about me too

Ri
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since 2008-02-01

Posts 67
Blackburn, England

5 posted 2008-02-29 01:27 PM

I often wonder why we do actually cry when we are sad, and love cannot really be clearly defined
One could say the confusions presented i this poem aren't just for adolescents; but life long.
Nice poem =)

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

6 posted 2008-03-19 12:07 PM

thank you

JJ

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

7 posted 2008-03-19 02:33 PM

JJ, very nice poem I really liked it!
Krysti

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

8 posted 2008-03-19 03:59 PM

great poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

9 posted 2008-03-28 06:29 PM

I love this poem! But who's it about? you dont have to write it on here acctrually you dont have to say at all but im just curious if i know this person. lol

Katarina
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since 2008-03-10

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AUSTRALIA, N.S.W

10 posted 2008-03-29 07:08 PM

really nice
i always wonder of these things

xbrokenxlullabyx
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since 2007-12-25

Posts 36
NJ, U.S.A.

11 posted 2008-03-29 08:37 PM

I'm confused about dreams
that are crushed in my sight
I'm confused about tears
and why they fall from these eyes

I'm confused about time
and why it has to fly by
I'm confused about thoughts
that dont leave my mind

i like these two stanzas the best. great job!

Susanna V.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

12 posted 2008-04-01 01:14 AM

thank you!! you all are so nice!

JJ

rockangel_gv
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since 2008-03-29

Posts 43

13 posted 2008-04-01 10:25 AM

I like this poem. I think is great.

23heavens
New Member

since 2008-04-02

Posts 8
India

14 posted 2008-04-03 07:10 AM

Hey Loved this Poem...propably best describes how im feeling right now...Great Write...!!!

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

15 posted 2008-05-17 12:10 PM

thank you!

JJ

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