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Her Very Own Storm
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Her Very Own Storm |
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SunnySyn Junior Member
since 2008-02-19
Posts 15Texas, United States |
I like to write metaphorically about feeling as related to natural occurrence and to the ocean/sea... Don't know why. It just seems right. Her Very Own Storm By: The windbreaker Salty crystal clear droplets fall into her ocean Cascading nonstop, setting ripples into motion For Hopes and Dreams, broken and unbound Every one after, for wants that couldn't be found Little clouds of grey formed and flood her mind Hiding her sweet-hearted nature and ability to be kind In search for the lost of something that she never had Cause her to lose faith, that hallucinating fad To seek out a solution, she looks to the Sun To warm her heart, for it feels she has none The tide grows strong with every ripple that was made Her reflection that cried back starts to fade Closing her eyes to not see the turmoil she called For wanting so much and not expecting her fall She let emotions take over causing the Sun to die away Only she can stop the Storm that's coming But chooses not to this day Signing off, SunnySyn =) |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Lovely lovely. I like the way said that thing about looking towards the sun to warm her heart. Great job, {~~~*~~~} {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] |
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SunnySyn Junior Member
since 2008-02-19
Posts 15Texas, United States |
Thank You. I appreciate that. =) Signing off, |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
liked it xoxoxoxoxoxox- Star |
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