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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-02-27 05:53 PM



well well
what have we here
a life thats wasted
in horror and fear

left alone
it just ages like wine
perfect on the outside
like everythings fine

smiles so forced
through gritted teeth
you just wave them on
because they just dont see

hurting
and left all alone
forty floors above the world
its so bitter cold

so i'll run now
and never look back
jump off the railing
and hope to crack

im just a hollow shell
of what i was before
aching and hurting
but begging for more

© Copyright 2008 Bryan Lucas - All Rights Reserved
SunnySyn
Junior Member
since 2008-02-19
Posts 15
Texas, United States
1 posted 2008-02-27 07:09 PM


LOVED IT!!! That was fantabulous. (Yes I mashed the words Fantastic and Fabulous together.)But honestly that was a good reading.
XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
2 posted 2008-02-27 07:18 PM


Amazing...I was flabergahsted....(how the heck do u spell that...*mumbles to self*)

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
3 posted 2008-02-27 08:43 PM


umm another good piece, you are incredibly good- do you know that?

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
4 posted 2008-02-28 06:17 PM


Amazing! I'm speachless! that doesn't often happen!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
5 posted 2008-02-28 06:29 PM


You were right, Talent Never Dies.. It only gets stronger...
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2008-03-03 05:31 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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