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Teen Poetry #8

After this heart break

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-02-26 10:09 PM

Ask me nothing, it's not
worth your breath. I can't
say yes to what you will
ask. I know how you think,
I won't answer you.

Hating everything about your
presence, wishing you to
leave. Screaming in your
face of what I once was; what
you distroyed.

I know that you wont love
me back, you'll just stab me
once again with your blade of
innocence. Screaming you
want nothing more than
for me to die. Ask me nothing,
because I know you don't care.

FoReVeRbRokEn

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

1 posted 2008-02-26 11:05 PM

this is a great poem emily...... i like it

u spelled destroyed wrong
lol

~-Keagan-~

wishesanddreams
New Member

since 2008-02-26

Posts 5

2 posted 2008-02-27 12:05 PM

I like this peom

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-02-27 01:36 AM

ohhhh wow Emily i loved this I have felt this wai many times before.. loved the way yooh portrayed feeling and thoughts..
Krysti

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-02-27 05:59 PM

Shut up Keagan you know I can't spell!

And Thanks Krysti!! I appreciate it!

FoReVeRbRokEn

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-02-27 06:38 PM

your getting better each time i read your poems... this is just so amazing!!! i can't wait to see what else you'll come up with next.

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

6 posted 2008-02-28 10:10 PM

hay hay hay! Language lol

xoxoxoxox- star

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