»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #8
»
Endings
| Teen Poetry #8 |
|
Endings |
|
|
rebel~angel Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 71Iowa USA |
The final page of this tale has been turned, the final word has been written and read. The reader sits, stunned by this turn of events afraid to move at all- terrified of closing the cover. When the lid of the coffin slams shut and locks and the clumps of organic matter have covered the top then the mourners all leave- and the screaming of the prisoners can no longer be stopped. Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming. |
||
| © Copyright 2008 Rebecca - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
crimsonXnails Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 108dark/little/heavan.:*:. |
hey hey, good write Rebecca, keep it up! !Tracey! |
||
|
Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
i love the endings to the movies lol random xoxoxoxox- Star |
||
|
Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Very nice - very deep. I love this poem! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
||
|
rebel~angel Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 71Iowa USA |
Star, I would appreciate it if you would refrain from being quite so random....I really want your opinion of the poem, and your comment does not sound like an opinion. It sounds like someone commenting on this just to comment on it. Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming. |
||
|
rebel~angel Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 71Iowa USA |
Star, I would appreciate it if you would refrain from being quite so random....I really want your opinion of the poem, and your comment does not sound like an opinion. It sounds like someone commenting on this just to comment on it. Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming. |
||
Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
interesting, very interesting... i sort of dont understand this cuz you lost me at the end.. please explain?? Zach  |
||
|
rebel~angel Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 71Iowa USA |
lol I got that same reaction from a friend of mine...I told her to think about being buried alive. If that isn't enough explanation, let me know and I'll try to explain more. Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
