I Have Met, Myself, a Crossroads

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Teen Poetry #8

I Have Met, Myself, a Crossroads

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

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0 posted 2008-02-24 08:14 PM

I Have Met, Myself, a Crossroads

I have met, myself, a crossroads
The cruelest type beknown
And fair the way, the solid path
Enclosed in both a moan

For love hath crossed me swiftly
In two directions fly
It matters- cares not for the burdens
But only the matter of why

I’ve kissed a many shallow
Fair winded opportunes
But yet have left to mind myself
Blind so many moons

How could I dare to think
Or wish for mock and glee
But death at heart hath fondled
The deepest sense to flee

In places two and troubled
I can not play this game
To lie and sweep the murderous
Would bring me hate and shame

So, which path may one so take
That would lead to sun and cheer
I can not now decide
Which one I hold more dear

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2008-02-24 08:20 PM

i liked the ideas in this. i thought that the style of words got in the way at times. what inspired you to use words such as "hath"? again, i did like the ideas in it.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2008-02-24 08:35 PM

Becoming Jane- and my love for all things old english, my literature, my love of launguge- take your pick.

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-02-24 09:28 PM

I loved this Kate! Great write, exelent expression.
Remember I'm here for you. Best of luck, making your desition you know. It will hurt either way, which pain will be worse...there are better people to ask then me.
Best of luck,
Best of love,
Frank

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
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4 posted 2008-02-25 06:03 PM

i love that saying of yours "best of luck, best of love" it is quite charming you know, and very comfoting.

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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