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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
Hello there, how do you do? Why thank you for asking. Im doing just fine and you? Me.... im doing ok How come you never sent me any email back? How come when ever I send you something you only write back, but when you send me something and I reply back to you I never get an answer back? Whats this all about? Are you disapointed im leaving for Florida when we graduate? Is it because im one of the few kids in are class actually leaving this pathetic town? Where everyone goes to the Junior College or one of the State Colleges?. I wont ever forget you....... Believe me...... And hey don't worry about your future either. Your already gonna be a real successful Your one of the smartest girls in are school Getting into one of the State colleges won't be hard for you if thats where you plan on going Me.....Well I gotta get outta this place. I need to find myself I don't no who I am or whats going to really happen to me. Im really relying on getting hired by Paramount of Pixar. Really any big company out there. Sides don't you ever ever ever think I'll forget you Promise me that. Promise me that. Were going to experience new things Meet new people and have new dreams come out of nowhere Are you ready for this? Hello? Did you just hear a word I said? Wow Guess not....... This is why I need to get out of this town Thats really depressing. I guess my thoughts for you were wrong and should change. Since you didn't hear a word I just said. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow i really know how you feel on this one. The thought of someone you thought you knew but now feel's like there a stranger... the feeling of your dreams are soo far away and yet theres soo near to you that you can crab it and take it. Wow this poem sort of inlightened me like it made me remember the thoughs that i use to think... Thanks for the insparation. and Great poem. this is going in my library ~Zach~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Well Written! ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
good |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
This is by far one of the best poems ive written I would have to say. And I was wondering if anyone knows of any places that give out scholorships for poetry? |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
well Im not saying I wanna turn this one in but I could doctor this up and make it better or do you think it would need to be longer? |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Nah its great as it is!! Besides personally I dont like reading very long poems. LOL ~Zach~ |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
ok thanks |
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