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Dark Star
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0 posted 2008-02-23 03:37 PM



Melting

It melting away
the snow is disappearing
from the warm sun day

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1 posted 2008-02-23 08:09 PM


AND I THANK GOD FOR IT!!! I don't like the cold...lol. Good write

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2 posted 2008-02-23 09:57 PM


Yes i agree. THE SNOW MUST GO!!!! lol
Dark Star
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3 posted 2008-02-23 10:33 PM


forever Broken

thnx

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4 posted 2008-02-23 10:34 PM


falling rain-

I couldnt agree more


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5 posted 2008-02-24 11:08 AM


For me I like the Winter!

I love the cold weather, But I do like springs warm sun and stuff.

I kind of miss the warm weather, but I do love the winter!

ARCTIC WIND

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6 posted 2008-02-24 11:09 AM


Thnx artic

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7 posted 2008-02-24 06:48 PM


im just commenting random poems LOL. this is good!

  

~Zach~  



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8 posted 2008-02-24 09:57 PM


WHAT!!! Of course the snow has to go!!!
No offence Arctic but I absolutly Loath the cold!
I like the poem...he he

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

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Dark Star
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9 posted 2008-02-25 06:51 PM


falling rain

lol

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10 posted 2008-02-25 06:52 PM


earl-

I agree both ways lol

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