At Least it Didn’t Touch My Heart

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Teen Poetry #8

At Least it Didn’t Touch My Heart

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2008-02-22 10:34 PM

At Least it Didn’t Touch My Heart

The pain that’s on the inside
That sits within my ribs
Cripples my thoughts and actions
And makes it hard to breathe

The pain of physical origins
Has less painful repercussions
Than those of emotions
But are just as potent in the end

Each breathe brings on a fresh new pang
Of rippling stabbing pain
It takes into no small account
The factors that unseam

But this pain is now yet bearable
For it doesn’t touch my heart
It’s leaving me in lesser peace
But keeping me from distraught

Maybe a few Tylenol
Could stop this sharp and biting claw
But I doubt the until morning
That I shall be free of such a pain

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Falling rain

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1 posted 2008-02-22 10:43 PM

i know how you feel. really i do...

this is really good!!

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 2008-02-22 10:47 PM

thanks the pain in my rib inspired it, i thought "why not write about it?!? it is an feeling -no?"

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Falling rain

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3 posted 2008-02-22 10:55 PM

well of course it is Kate lol. if you do feel it emotionly or physically then you can feel it LOL

Earl Robertson
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4 posted 2008-02-22 10:59 PM

LOL ha ha haa ha
I came up with quite the elabrate, deep meaning for this poem...and then found out it was perfectly literal! ROFL Exelent job Kate!!!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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5 posted 2008-02-23 11:33 AM

aww- I'd love to hear what you thought before hand frank.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Dark Star
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6 posted 2008-02-23 03:33 PM

touching

xoxoxoxoxoxoxox- Star

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-02-24 10:59 AM

Enjoyed!

ARCTIC WIND

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