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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
Theres a girl who looks at herself every morning in the mirror. She wonders why shes even waiting for him, she thinks its just turning into a dream now. All her friends no she needs him, but he doesn't wanna take any chances. So days and years pass by every single second. And she wakes up every morning looking at her pretty face in the morning wondering if its ever going to happen. Her friends no shes getting lonely even though she smiles and laughs they can see she needs him. The sun sets during a cool spring night and she sees herself in his arms, but a rain cloud appears and ruins everything. He says he's sorry for the rain coming, but she smiles and says shes never had such a good time. There hearts racing having the time of there lives. Wishing for the moment never to end. She looks at him in the eyes and says its MAGIC. She wakes up the next morning only to find out it was all a dream. So she goes to the mirror and looks at herself in the mirror. Happy as can be she starts to wonder and says to herself I had the time of my life last night even though it was all a dream. She walks out side and sees him standing outside waiting for her She cant believe whats happening . He says I had a dream that was full of MAGIC last night. And you were in it. Did you have the same dream? They walk to school and it starts to rain a soft spring rain. She thinks to herself wow all my dreams are finally coming true. It's like this was destiny.He looks at her and says no it's not destiny its MAGIC. She wonders how he read her mind and he says its because were ment to be together. All these years ive gone with out you ive finally gotten some nerve to let you in. Summer comes and they start to talk about college. He says he's probably leaving state and doesn't no if everything is gonna work. She looks at him in the eyes and says only if we use some MAGIC Kyle |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow, there wuz a lot tue read here... great story in it but a little hard to read, great job for your first post tho... try making the lines shorter, instead of like paragraphs.. Welcome To Passions Kyle. hope to read more soon Krysti |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
thanks for the advice and thanks for reading it.  |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Whoa when i first saw this i was like "Aww cr^p. i dont want to read all this." but once i did it was all worth wild. this is really good for your like 1st..2nd..maybe 3rd post!!! keep up the great work!! ~Zach~ |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
I believe in magic too |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
Sorry lol that was my first post, but thanks for the input I really appreciate it. I put a lot of time into all my poems.. I have a hole obok pretty much I just never shared them it makes me happy to no people like them |
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