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XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-02-19 09:49 PM

Sitting all alone in
my own world of love,
waiting for your hand to
reach out
and hold me up.
Lift me
higher than the clouds
where
I can look down, to
see all that I have
left behind. To see what you
saved me from, because now,
I shine.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

1 posted 2008-02-20 11:01 PM

hey hey,
  emmy, wait no longer... you are my sunshine! i don't know what i'd do without you babe... wait...uh, oh shoot i'm sitting on it. so much for a dramatic hood flip! keep on shining,
  your true bestest admirer,
  !Tracey! (pharoh pixie noodle)

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-02-21 12:25 PM

Heya Em,
Love this love all your work.. Your an amazing talent.. you rock everyones socks off lol..

Love Lots...
Jessie Hun (Lol)

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-02-21 09:26 AM

I loved this sooo much!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-02-21 02:42 PM

lol thanx so much guys! and Tracey...Shut up! it wasn't that funny, i was sick!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-02-21 04:26 PM

You should notice that being where you are now is a thing you should really Thank to God. Because you got where you are, On your own choices!

I like how you described the way of rising to a better place. Where you are now is the better place to be. Everyone who is living on this earth is all blessed with a certain gift!

Thank you for this Read, I reall Enjoyed it

ARCTIC WIND

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

6 posted 2008-02-21 07:28 PM

Yes i do realize that and it feels really good. What I "was" before now seems scary to me and I fight with myself eveyday that this is what i need and want. Thanx for reading and I'm glad you liked it.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

7 posted 2008-02-21 11:28 PM

hey hey,
don't tell me to shut up babe, ur the one who prefers the "dramatic hood flip" to the ever-popular "menacing cape twirl and face cover". hope you get better my little fambire queen. luv yas
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

8 posted 2008-02-22 08:11 AM

I liked the poem over all but the flow just wasn't there it seemed that the lines were broken so when you read you read it disjointedly, I hope that makes sense.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

9 posted 2008-02-22 09:24 AM

wow this is really nice. I like this.

~Zach~

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

10 posted 2008-02-23 03:24 PM

Your name of this site shows emotion

xoxoxoxo-star

PoetsPlay
Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

11 posted 2008-02-28 11:30 PM

I really like your poem! It's great!

Alexandra

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

12 posted 2008-02-29 06:05 PM

I like it how Tracey's your greatest fan and I'm kinda like not noticed...

TJ

[&] she's a blood broken rose

RedNail
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

13 posted 2008-02-29 08:59 PM

I really like your style because it's diffrent. You inspire me. ^^

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

14 posted 2009-01-09 09:56 PM

Uhh...thanx!

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