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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


0 posted 02-19-2008 09:49 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX


Sitting all alone in
my own world of love,
waiting for your hand to
reach out
and hold me up.
Lift me
higher than the clouds
where
I can look down, to
see all that I have
left behind. To see what you
saved me from, because now,
I shine.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

© Copyright 2008 Emmalee Yuri - All Rights Reserved
crimsonXnails
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since 02-10-2008
Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.


1 posted 02-20-2008 11:01 PM       View Profile for crimsonXnails   Email crimsonXnails   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crimsonXnails

hey hey,
  emmy, wait no longer... you are my sunshine! i don't know what i'd do without you babe... wait...uh, oh shoot i'm sitting on it. so much for a dramatic hood flip! keep on shining,
  your true bestest admirer,
  !Tracey! (pharoh pixie noodle)

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

RevengeIsMine
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since 07-08-2006
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Australia


2 posted 02-21-2008 12:25 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Heya Em,
Love this love all your work.. Your an amazing talent.. you rock everyones socks off lol..

Love Lots...
Jessie Hun (Lol)
Earl Robertson
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since 01-21-2008
Posts 753
BC, Canada


3 posted 02-21-2008 09:26 AM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

I loved this sooo much!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 01-20-2008
Posts 887
Neverland


4 posted 02-21-2008 02:42 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

lol thanx so much guys! and Tracey...Shut up! it wasn't that funny, i was sick!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
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Realm of Supernatural


5 posted 02-21-2008 04:26 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

You should notice that being where you are now is a thing you should really Thank to God. Because you got where you are, On your own choices!

I like how you described the way of rising to a better place. Where you are now is the better place to be. Everyone who is living on this earth is all blessed with a certain gift!

Thank you for this Read, I reall Enjoyed it

ARCTIC WIND
XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


6 posted 02-21-2008 07:28 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Yes i do realize that and it feels really good. What I "was" before now seems scary to me and I fight with myself eveyday that this is what i need and want. Thanx for reading and I'm glad you liked it.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

crimsonXnails
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since 02-10-2008
Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.


7 posted 02-21-2008 11:28 PM       View Profile for crimsonXnails   Email crimsonXnails   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crimsonXnails

hey hey,
  don't tell me to shut up babe, ur the one who prefers the "dramatic hood flip" to the ever-popular "menacing cape twirl and face cover". hope you get better my little fambire queen. luv yas
  !Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

surf_painter
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since 04-10-2007
Posts 434
Canada


8 posted 02-22-2008 08:11 AM       View Profile for surf_painter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for surf_painter

I liked the poem over all but the flow just wasn't there it seemed that the lines were broken so when you read you read it disjointedly, I hope that makes sense.
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since 01-31-2008
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Small town, Illinois


9 posted 02-22-2008 09:24 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

wow this is really nice. I like this.

~Zach~

Dark Star
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since 02-20-2008
Posts 394
Lost in your eyes


10 posted 02-23-2008 03:24 PM       View Profile for Dark Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Star

Your name of this site shows emotion

xoxoxoxo-star
PoetsPlay
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since 12-22-2007
Posts 56
California


11 posted 02-28-2008 11:30 PM       View Profile for PoetsPlay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetsPlay

I really like your poem! It's great!

Alexandra

shattered-smiles
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since 01-20-2008
Posts 248
inside the shadows


12 posted 02-29-2008 06:05 PM       View Profile for shattered-smiles   Email shattered-smiles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shattered-smiles

I like it how Tracey's your greatest fan and I'm kinda like not noticed...

TJ

[&] she's a blood broken rose

RedNail
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since 02-29-2008
Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden


13 posted 02-29-2008 08:59 PM       View Profile for RedNail   Email RedNail   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RedNail

I really like your style because it's diffrent. You inspire me. ^^
XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


14 posted 01-09-2009 09:56 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Uhh...thanx!
 
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