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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
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0 posted 2008-02-19 06:16 AM



Hi Guys.. Haven't been around in ages.. but back now lol.. thanks for all the comments on my other work.. Really appreciated.. The title really doesn't fit but its random and soo am i lol.. Well Here Goes...
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The Doormat Of Heartbreak, Please Wipe Your Feet..

Can you see the deadly fire that burns behind her eyes?
It’s burning for revenge, and her last kiss goodbye
She used to have a heart you know, but some guy tore it out
Tore it from her chest because he said she could do without

But still she feels trapped, caught up in his web of lies
But this time she see’s through his deceit, see's past his disguise
You can say you’re sorry, but she won’t believe a word
After all she’s just a random chick, some simple annoying nerd

Now your back to hurt her, but she won’t fall for you again
You maybe her drug of choice, but this addiction she will win
So please leave her alone, just cut her some slack
Her freedom’s been a long time coming, and it’s a rather long walk back

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1 posted 2008-02-19 08:30 AM


interesting... good job! yea i just noticed that you havent been on in a long time. (frankly i started to get worried lol j/k) Great job!

~Zach~

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
2 posted 2008-02-19 05:44 PM


Great job Jess! as always it's really good. I don't think I can ever be more impressed and surprised than when I read your poems.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19
Posts 232
NJ, USA
3 posted 2008-02-20 04:43 PM


ooh! i like! good message too!


SunnySyn
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since 2008-02-19
Posts 15
Texas, United States
4 posted 2008-02-20 07:22 PM


That was lovely. Good Job!

Signing off,
        SunnySyn =)

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