The Dormant Seed of Solitude

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Teen Poetry #8

The Dormant Seed of Solitude

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2008-02-18 11:59 PM

The Dormant Seed of Solitude

The barrren fields inhale deeply and
if you look long enough, they
may just steal your
breath
away.
My eyes roll along the naked bodies of
these once modest lands and
notice very little aside from
clarity of thought.
Emptiness has indirectly led me to this
hushed home made of whispering reeds (which are far too secretive).
This is the only place I breathe and die,
laugh until I cry,
wrap my arms around myself and
just love
myself.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-02-19 01:05 AM

Alex mmm I loved the personification in this....(ohh yess big word for me haha) I loved the feeling of this too it just makes me feeli like I wuz there

Krysti

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-02-19 06:11 AM

I really love your work.. every one of your poems touches me.. i think you have one of the most unique talents in this place.. and this is just another piece of proof to prove my very point...

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2008-02-19 08:20 PM

well thank you both. I'm so glad that you guys appreciate it.

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