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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 2008-02-17 09:09 PM



These chains have been
released, unlocked from
my "life".I feel as if a
feather, floating softly
to hands of velvet that
will comfort and love me.

Feeling so light, every
burden has been taken away.
Now I have found something
better than self pitty, now
I can live for real. Now,
I have found God.


FoReVeR.BrOkEn

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (02-18-2008 07:13 PM).]

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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1 posted 2008-02-17 09:12 PM


nope def. keep the potatoes and carrots. lol. it was nice, a beautiful poem darling. beautiful.

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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2 posted 2008-02-17 09:50 PM


wow this is soo beautiful. love this poem!! and the patatos and carrots LOL!!! deffenent keep. lol

~Zach~

"Nice guys finish last"

XxForever.BrokenxX
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3 posted 2008-02-17 09:59 PM


all righty then, whateveru guys say!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

Earl Robertson
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4 posted 2008-02-17 11:03 PM


I know how it feels. Awsome isn't it?
Great poem!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

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shattered-smiles
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inside the shadows
5 posted 2008-02-18 09:07 AM


I noticed by the date and the time that you wrote this after ATF.  Am I right?  Anyway, good poem.  It's exactly how I feel too.  Keep up the work.
TJ

[&] she's a blood broken rose

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6 posted 2008-02-18 10:37 AM


wow emily......... i dont know what to say....... this is great.... eh veggies can't be a title maybe some thin related to god or something... idk or just keep the veggies cuz u hate me  lol

~-Keagan-~

XxForever.BrokenxX
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7 posted 2008-02-18 01:01 PM


ptsh, u know i dont hate u. I was actually thinking how u said u don't like 'raw' carrots so thats what i used...Potatoes and Carrots!(haha raw carrots) And yeah, i did write this right after ATF. It was amazing.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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