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Teen Poetry #8

forever

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

0 posted 2008-02-16 12:40 PM

forever i will forget u
forever i will regret
forever is a long time
and there was a time when we first met
i once missed u
i once loved u
but now we are apart
and now im beggining from the start
my heart is healing
but i will never be revealing
my thoughts, my confessions, my emotions, and my life
to u
forever is a long time
forever goes on with my heart n my life
forever

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-02-16 11:35 AM

omg!!! i love this poem. its deffenently going to my library!! keep up the good work

~Zach~

"From the ashes, flowers will bloom
The empty void, fills the room"

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

2 posted 2008-02-16 11:37 AM

hey hey,
beautiful poem! it sounded like a song, abolutly gorgeous

!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

Gurl_unknown_11
Junior Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 17
california

3 posted 2008-02-16 03:01 PM

i totally get this poem!!you did such a great job ^_^

_RaQuEl aka Gurl_unknown_11

LittleWillow
Member

since 2007-12-27

Posts 54

4 posted 2008-02-17 09:15 AM

Love it. Nice to have a poem about getting over something, but still having the memories and of course the heartache. Cos no-matter how much you think you have gotten over something, the heartache is still there. Well done! =]] x

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

5 posted 2008-02-18 11:34 AM

hey everyone thnx for the comments
and it is a song but it was a poem at first

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