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crimsonXnails
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dark/little/heavan.:*:.


0 posted 02-15-2008 06:52 PM       View Profile for crimsonXnails   Email crimsonXnails   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for crimsonXnails

hey guys,
  this poem is based on a dream i had a little while ago, so sorry for the cut off ending. i had to wake up some time. any way, you can be expecting more dream inspired poems... i have lots of dreams(XxForever.BrokenxX knows what i'm talking about! lol). enjoy
  !Tracey!


deep in th woods
where there is no sky,
stands three young girls
obsessed to die.
three young girls
with each a song,
to unlock the ground
where they belong.

one single girl
with firey eyes
and every night,
in pain she lies.
always hoping
you'd spill your beer,
so flames can spread
and kill her fears.

the second girl
can't take advice
or stop herself
with blades of ice.
she knows they just
melt at her wrist,
hot with her blood,
she can't resist.

and number three
with a weeping soul
in the night lake,
black, and cold.
no one sees her
tears in water.
her dying breath
has left it bitter.

deep in the woods,
walks a kind young boy
bringing presents
of suffering joy.
the three young girls
recieve their gifts,
laugh with delight,
and run quick and swift.

the first girl, with
firey eyes,
recieves a matchbox,
and then
she dies.

the second girl, with
all the lies
recieves a a steel dagger
and then
she dies.

the third girl, with
a watery disguise
receives a large stone
and then
she dies.

the kind young boy
benieth the trees
is blown away
in the summer night breeze.

he looks for more,
fools to decieve
as he floats high above
who will believe?

the kind young boy
looks down upon,
the young girls' graves
haunting the dawn.
as the sun rises
up over a steep,
the night falls apart,
the boy goes to sleep.

in a dark cave,
the kind boy lays down.
and out of the light,
without a sound,
the three young girls,
with dead, goastly speck.
kiss the sleeping boy
on the back of the neck...


if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying
© Copyright 2008 Tracey - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-15-2008 07:28 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

wow i love this poem. because i dream alot i know what it all looks like *sniker*. i like the girl number three with her watery eyes. idk why but i just like her...yes i know im weird like that.....
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2 posted 02-15-2008 09:40 PM       View Profile for forever*wishing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for forever*wishing

wow.
i really liked this
nice

there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

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3 posted 02-16-2008 03:13 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

wow this iz a really strong, deep poem... I loved it Tracey!!
Krysti
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4 posted 02-16-2008 09:04 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

wow- i wasn't going to read the whole thing at first but you sucked me in and i couldn't just read a little, i had to see how it ended, it was so morrbid and wonderfully done.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

crimsonXnails
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dark/little/heavan.:*:.


5 posted 01-10-2009 07:00 PM       View Profile for crimsonXnails   Email crimsonXnails   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crimsonXnails

hey zack,
the girl with the watery disguise is actually someone you know... da da DAH!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


6 posted 01-10-2009 08:11 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

i love this poem..i really do.

Miss.Emmalee

"Who the **** are you?!!?.. GET AWAY FROM MY LIMO!!"

 
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