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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Of Conversation In conversation I use my face to hide I write this poem Knowing I have lied Though only truth I’ve said The words twist round Each other long And I must question this Is not false expression worse Than face of living dead? "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ahh Frank yooh always blow me away.. I loved it!!! Happy Valentines Day!! Krysti |
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Lordadon Junior Member
since 2008-02-14
Posts 18Singapore |
Great way to express yourself, i like this. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
ummm lies, don't they just become us in ways we wish they wouldn't? umm, anyways, hope you are better. nice write, you have a wonderful style. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
I liked it, it was nice and simple and just a very good write |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Is false expression worse?? hmmm once again i have to think about this question. great write! |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Thanks guys glad you like it! Kate this poem is more of a thought than an expression of myself. On the other hand this thought does drive me insane(er) so... "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
more insane. lol. english- geesh you gotta love and hate it. lol. i understand that. so what shall it be today- the chicken or the wren . . . and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Bah! Who needs grammer!?! (what does she think I am?! a poet or somthing?) "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
she thinks, that . . . you are more insane . . . |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
and Earl thanks you...for relizing that so fast... "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
And Kate thanks you- for making it so apprent, and tells you that she's just as insane . . . really . . . hahahaha and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
hahahahaha earl ur funny haha and kate ur hallarious! lol ~Zach~ |
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