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flyleaf88
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since 2008-02-12
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0 posted 2008-02-13 10:58 PM


over in the dark
nothing in the world
nothing understands
forget it
blue seas
brown dirt
its all colorless
heartaches;stupid
love;all lies
the birds in the sky;motionless
dripping blood,so red
if they knew
stars;what does it mean?
me;makes no sense

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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 321

1 posted 2008-02-13 11:09 PM


this is cool i kinda understand it
nice poem

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
2 posted 2008-02-14 09:28 AM


omg i loved it. great job.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
3 posted 2008-02-14 11:54 PM


Welcome to passions!!!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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4 posted 2008-02-15 01:12 AM


Very beautiful poem Fly.... loved it
Welcome to Passions!!! Happy Valentines Day!!!
Krysti

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