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I am the arch angel
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0 posted 2008-02-12 09:22 PM



As I see my board spin I watch for the grip
Flying in the the air, Yes!  I land it , No! I slip
OW! The concrete is not my friend
But my skating career is not at its end
Time to hit some stairs, theres some uptown
I put in my headphones,drop my board, i get up off the ground...
As my music screams, I am pretty much flying
As i get to the set, It's the one I've been trying..
I ride up ready to go,forgetting that it's a long drop
I pick up speed and give my board a pop
I land with a thud,I'm out cold...
I wake up in an ambulance they said i was bold...
I was released with a cast and got into the car..
I look at the crew and say " Lets do it again that was gnar"

~-Keagan-~

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1 posted 2008-02-13 08:37 PM


lol I know how you feel about something that exilerates you like that...good job. (how the heck do you spell that...?)

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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2 posted 2008-02-13 08:40 PM


haha this poem is one of your better poems. (and by better i mean happyier) lol i like it. keep up the good work!!
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