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Teen Poetry #8

Almost Sensible

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

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0 posted 2008-02-12 08:55 PM

Almost Sensible

It is with growing agitation
And a crude sour taste on my tongue
That I write for lack of better things
Of no interest that come

I’m kinda sickly pale
With the sheen of once shed sweat
The residue of illness
That lets me not forget

That while pain is usually descriptive
For the outward tangible race
It is in the depths of emotions
Where it puts its name in distaste

It’s a look into my future
That refutes the life gone past
But I find time so worrying
It’s caught into low drafts

The sickness that haunted
My body through and through
Is going out so quickly
That I’m gaining back my hue

It must be the reason
That through the times of day
I’m gaining back my reason
In this poem to display

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-02-12 11:36 PM

Good for you Kate! I loved the poem and the emotions behind it!
Goin in my library

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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