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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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0 posted 2008-02-12 07:01 PM



I cry because of your eyes;
  Breathtaking and deep,
   Showing what you truly feel.
I cry because of your arms;
  Holding me tight,
   Always and forever.
I cry because of your lips;
  Sweet and gentle,
   Passionate and loving.
I cry because of your hands;
  Soft and delicate,
   Caressing and holding mine.
I cry because you are you;
  The girl from my dreams,
   The girl of my dreams.
I cry because you care.
But most of all,
  I cry because of what you have done to me.
  You made me happier than anyone else could.
  You opened up a world of new feelings.
  You made my life complete.
I cry... because I love you.
And I cry because this is just a dream that will never be…………

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Earl Robertson
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1 posted 2008-02-12 07:04 PM


I love it! Great write!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

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Falling rain
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2 posted 2008-02-12 07:10 PM


wicked awsome poem. i love it. keep up the work
XxForever.BrokenxX
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3 posted 2008-02-12 08:27 PM


aww! that is a really great poem. I love it! Great Job!!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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4 posted 2008-02-13 12:43 PM


ohh Chris hunn, this wuz soo amazing!!!! I loved it!!!!! a lot.. beautiful write...
hope tue talk to yooh soon
love Krysti

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5 posted 2008-02-13 05:39 PM


aww... great write!
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