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Gurl_unknown_11
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since 2008-02-10
Posts 17
california

0 posted 2008-02-11 11:22 PM



the smile on your face makes my day
the person you are is so great
i cant you get you out of my head
theres nothing i wouldnt do to be with you
to know your all mine
to see you everyday

i cant breath when your around
i cant live when your gone
so please dont leave my love
yours ill always be
never will i go,here ill stay forever
till there are no days ahead

i love you.
and forever will
nothing you can do will ever change that
your perfect in everyway
no flaws or errors
just pure perfection
so please bebe be mine


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Falling rain
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since 2008-01-31
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Small town, Illinois
1 posted 2008-02-11 11:27 PM


aww this is nice but im sort of depressed because of my love who dumped me today . but this is my problem not yours (i dont know why im even telling you this) but over all great write
LittleWillow
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since 2007-12-27
Posts 54

2 posted 2008-02-12 05:50 PM


Wkd. Well written =] x
hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
3 posted 2008-02-12 06:45 PM


aww thats really sweet... good job!!!

[This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (02-12-2008 08:17 PM).]

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