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wolf girl
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0 posted 2008-02-11 10:30 PM


im trying to do a abstract write. i think this is horrible but tell me what you think.
help please!
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twirling wirling
spinning curling
nothing stops

free
i can fly
i will never die

bounce bounce
hit hit
plea thats it



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1 posted 2008-02-11 10:32 PM


hmm not bad for a begainer abstract writer. i like it. =)
Earl Robertson
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2 posted 2008-02-11 10:37 PM


Not bad at all. Quite good acctualy. Keep it up!

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young_blood
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3 posted 2008-02-11 11:15 PM


like they said, its not bad. the point of being abstract is to loosely connect ideas. they should flow, but not be obvious. keep working and crafting.
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4 posted 2008-02-11 11:17 PM


great start!! I couldn't even begin to write abstract..
Krysti

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