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Teen Poetry #8

Nothing

Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

0 posted 2008-02-11 01:21 AM

I am nothing
nothing comes to mind

I lost everything
in an instant of time

I have something
something I must do

For now I must return to who i once was
to save the very person who I had lost
to end the nothingness controlling my heart
and to save myself from losing all that i love.

"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-02-11 02:32 PM

Great poem! The meaning behind it is somthing I have been through many times and I wish you the best of luck.
Good write!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-02-11 10:58 PM

simply beautiful.. loved this!!!
Krysti

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

3 posted 2008-02-20 07:37 PM

Beautifully penned, little shivers walked up my spine reading this. Just bcz, its really well penned

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-02-20 08:26 PM

Great write! I know what you're talking about

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

Ian L.R. Sanchez
Junior Member

since 2007-07-05

Posts 16

5 posted 2008-02-20 08:48 PM

I needed this poem... thanks so much for posting T.T

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

6 posted 2008-02-20 09:07 PM

interesting.. just interesting...

~Zach~

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