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Elias Nevermore
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since 2007-11-03
Posts 152


0 posted 2008-02-11 01:16 AM


Here me out you accursed shadow
of doubt that reeks terror on me
and devours the inner thoughts
that allow me to surive in this world

I am aware of your horrific plans
to turn me into one of your captives
and force me to live in fear of
all that attaches me to reality

Your voice has grown wearier lately
Has my resiliency affected you
or is this just another mind game
to aid you in your ambitions

I am so sick of that confidence
you portray when adressing me
To me this fight is not over yet
There is still hope of me ending this

Don''t get to relaxed you dark air
above my head, for the day will come
when I send you back to the inner
area of my soul you can never condemn

"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All

© Copyright 2008 Author Andrew E.L. - All Rights Reserved
Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
1 posted 2008-02-11 02:59 PM


Man, I loved this poem!! You and I have this problem in common. I wish you the best of luck and if you want to talk email me or somthing.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
2 posted 2008-02-11 08:01 PM


What you speak of sends terror through my heart- I have lived in fear of this horror this thing- it haunts me still . . .

-Kate


though my horror is more real than doubt- my terror is hell or the touch of it

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
3 posted 2008-02-11 08:33 PM


Again we are agreed Kate (sigh)

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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