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Battle Cry of the Youth
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Battle Cry of the Youth |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I wrote this poem about one of the best expiriances in my life. It's a serious but very happy poem for me. It is the promise to keep living and trying for the best even when things don't feel as good as they did then. So without further ado: Battle Cry of the Youth Raise your voices loud and clear Remember friends, love is near A spirit so strong that all must cheer Drunk with joy and not with beer Raise your voices loud and clear! Crying, laughing, here we go Armour on run to and fro Dancing, singing, high and low Friends now may we meet the foe Raise your voices... here we go! Raise your voices yell and cheer Stand together there as here And when each day you face the mirror Remember light that ends all fear So raise your voices loud and clear! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
wow nice job- it reminds me of Youth Conference (I'm a Mormon, and YC is one of the summer programmes for the youth)very nice it brought up some good memories for me. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
(violent coughing fit) This poem is about EFY. ps That's soooo cool!!!! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
your mormon?!? sweet! -Kate the thoguth came to me that you might be b/c of the way you spake, but i didn't dare ask, hunnie girl is too! awwwwwwwwwww this is totally cool! and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Isn't it!! (that will realy change how I read you're and hunnies poems now!) I'm sorry I just have to do this... YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
ps there are some poems of mine i want you to check out since you're a mormon too, lol. they are religiously specific and i'd love to get your view they are: Legacy of Faith Dakota Cold The Woman with Hazel Eyes The Eternal Line The Master’s Love Hands from Hell -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
OK if we're playing that game you should read: The Measure of an Artist Ghosts Without it All Fool Those are the realy religious poems I've posted so far. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl "Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl (Yes I am crazy) |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
that game!?! THAT GAME?!? why I'd love to. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
LOL Those were great poems Kate. I espeicialy loved The Masters Love, I have a friend named Amanda who needs to see it! Understand I'll be reading all of your poems with this knowledge now! lol "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl "Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl (Yes I am crazy) |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
it makes them deeper- no? -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Oh yes "The measure of an artist a simple thing to tell..." "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
where is that from? -Kate ps i hope i didn't say it, lol, how would i look then to say something and not remember? gaaaahhh! and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
No that's me, my poem in Open forum, that's the first two lines. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
beautiful. lol, we're not supposed to chit chat in the forums, lol. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Bahh (sorry yet another usless post) Nice chit chat though "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow first second and third stanza AMAZAZING!!!!!! hehe so lyke the whole poem!!!....small worrld eh? Krysti |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
w8 a min... Frank you're from BC too??? wow!!! |
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Elias Nevermore Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 152 |
I am not a mormon, but i can still appreciate the message of this poem. Great job. --Nevermore |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
I like the poem alot and it just flows sooo nicely |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed.. ARCTIC WIND Life isn't just given to you Life is about Creating it ...... -Arctic Wind |
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