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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2008-02-08 02:35 AM


the thing that inspired this poem was the energy drink ten minutes before klass and trying to fit 3 rugby player guys and two girls in a 3 seater truck and speed tue skool so we weren't late... yess we actually made it without being that late only one minute late.. and the teacher didn't even know haha. yess we almost krashed haha.. btw don't accidently bump the drives elbow wen they are turning haha kk so here's my poem wen I wuz sooo HYPER!!!!I think this is my very first not serious poem haha
~Krysti~

I'm high off life
I don't need drugs
getting rid of the winter bugs

I got my apple juice
and a Charleston Chew
I look up, The skies are blue!!!

sitting in French class
teacher's droning, mind is gone
under my desk I have no shoes on!!!!!

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1 posted 2008-02-08 09:26 AM


omg, hunnie, this totally made me laugh. I know the feeling.
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2 posted 2008-02-08 09:46 AM


funny poem

but ugh...how about seat belts?! How about not putting your life in danger by getting in a car that packed?! Freakin this mommie out kid.... I'd rather you were late to school than to see kids splattered....be safe ok?

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3 posted 2008-02-08 11:34 AM


The poem itself is amusing.  The prelude - I'm afraid I have to agree with SEA.  That is VERY scary (and not in the least funny)  stuff..


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4 posted 2008-02-08 02:11 PM


Good poem, bad driving.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

wolf girl
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5 posted 2008-02-08 05:45 PM


i love how they are concerned when i have done that too. lol great poem.

-jenna

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6 posted 2008-02-08 05:51 PM


LOL! I love the first line! he he he

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

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7 posted 2008-02-08 06:11 PM


oh my gosh i love the last line- no shoes, haha that almost happened to me a few times. . .

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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