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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
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Neverland

0 posted 2008-02-07 09:59 PM



Sailing high above all the
rest, holding tightly on to
my heart. If I let it fall
I'll loose it all,
forever and eternity.


Delecate as rain, pulsing
in my hands. Depending on love
to hold me up, save from
these screaming hights. I
fly over cities of despair,
clutching my chance to my
chest.

Nothing can save me from where
I lie in this meddow, surrounded
by my worst fear. Captured by
love.



FoReVeR.BrOkEn

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (02-09-2008 12:57 AM).]

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I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02
Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA
1 posted 2008-02-07 11:01 PM


this is a good one i like it... within trapped hearts maybe or within my trapped heart? maybe idk

~-Keagan-~

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
2 posted 2008-02-08 01:45 PM


Captured by
love.

Ooooo I love that last line. This poem has great emotional imagery. I feel all kinds of meaning behind your words, a lot more than I get out of it intellectualy.

Amazing job.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02
Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA
3 posted 2008-02-08 10:50 PM


HEY emily i seriously need you to like be a music listener song person pleaaaaaaaaaaaaasssse!? i found a really good song you will LOVE IT!!!!!

~-Keagan-~

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