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0 posted 2008-02-07 09:58 PM


Such A Sensitive Topic...
I think
I'm ready
To make a promise
To myself
And to God

He made me for someone
And someone for me
So who should have me but that one person?

But I'm scared
And unsure
And worried

For what if the right moment comes???
Then what?
I need to know where I stand
But my heart has built such strong barricades
That even I cannot get in

Before I make this promise
I must know what I believe
He made me for someone
And someone for me
So to who else should I give my virginity?
No one. I dont think.

Such a sensitive topic
I blush a violet red as I type
And I pray that my uneven rythym and lack of rhyme
Will be forgiven

I will not tell
My parents
Just you who read my heart
Such a scary journey
But who else can make the start?

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Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
1 posted 2008-02-08 05:49 PM


An exelent poem. I love the expression, the emotion behind it.
My advise to you is to make sure that you are doing what God wants of you before you do it. It's easy to get trapped in passion and then...dumped. Be carful
Best of luck
Frank
(ps Good Write)

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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