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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2008-02-07 09:51 PM



It Always was a Perilous Life

We are ready for the times
When the world will die before our eyes
It’s getting close and coming near
Your body shaking from the fear

Promises so short and vain
Bound with indeliberate pain
We dare to touch the face of death
When we discover what is left

A simple smile could heal the world
But instead our lips are cruelly curled
I’m waiting dear, come take my hand
We’ll fight our way through perilous land

I’ll tell you now- it’s almost a cause lost
To try and save the world at so high a cost
But we should not let that fact deter
All the things we can make occur

It’s rocky and sheer- deadly on our side
We’re fine my dear, I said (I lied)
Time is thin, but I’ll be right here
Until I’m taken from you dear

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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pen&paper
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1 posted 2008-02-07 10:04 PM


wow...this relly left me speechless...amazing job really. Definately going in my library. One of the best I've ever read. Great Job, Red.
Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
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2 posted 2008-02-08 05:45 PM


I also have nothing to describe this poem or its poet...except...perhaps this
          
          

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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3 posted 2008-02-08 05:58 PM


earl, pen, thanks! so much! aww i feel so nice today . . . everything is going my way.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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