Stone Cold Masks/True Love

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Teen Poetry #8

Stone Cold Masks/True Love

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

0 posted 2008-02-07 06:39 PM

Stone cold masks,
all frozen in smile
The cold kisses they give
not just once in a while
Compare not to lip moving lips
Soul touching soul
So unlike emotionless lie
Makes the meaning of love seem whole

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-02-07 07:16 PM

hmmmm...interesting choice of words. I like it!!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2008-02-07 08:26 PM

i like this. its detached. well done.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-02-07 08:27 PM

interesting poem. i like it. keep on writing!

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2008-02-07 08:35 PM

young blood nailed it- detached, almost like it was a soul who spake it. eerie, but very well done.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

5 posted 2008-02-07 09:29 PM

Thank you, thank you thats exactly what I intended...NOT
I didn't even noticed that it was so detached untill young_blood said so! (Yes I know I wrote it but...)
Glad you guys like it. lol

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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