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Teen Poetry #8

Not another Course . . .

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
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0 posted 2008-02-07 09:01 AM

Not another Course . . .

You’re falling in love with me
I know this simple fact
And you don’t know me well enough
To know the emotional thoughts that I lack

I’ve always loved to be loved
And who could deny such adoration
I know that I’m not sufficiently strong
To oppose that kind of motion

You’re falling in love with my ways
The words and the thoughts of my mind
It’s almost kind of romantic
That you’re going for one of your kind

But really I should stop this
When I have so much on my plate
To add another course would be
A mockery of fate

But the thing that I’m realizing
Is that it really doesn’t matter
I want what I want and I need what I need
The more important is the latter

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-02-07 12:56 PM

WOW Kate!! Not only is this one of the best combinations of words I've read in a while it also is very pertinant to my life right now! Exelent exelent write!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

2 posted 2008-02-07 01:06 PM

Very nice! it flowed smoothly...loved it.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-02-07 01:52 PM

you're falling in love with me earl?!? hahahahahaha lol, jk jk. glad i can help.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-02-07 09:22 PM

Gaaah did I say that?!? This calls for some serious back pedling!
ROFL (wipes away tear)

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2008-02-07 09:50 PM

hahahaha, well, hahahahaha look at the scrape you've gotten yourself into. . . lol.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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