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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
this is an old one that i found so idk what your gonna think but it could use help im sure. _____________________________________________ anger is a strong emotion it usually prouts from broken devotion when you say you love, you should mean it anger often leads to hatred it takes love to hate something bright becomes dark it grows like moss on bark it will break you down it will make you go mad to hate it is to love that devotion that was created is now dated this is the reason your hatred was born now you can do nothing but scorn |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Exelent job, and so true! I love the connection with moss growing on a tree. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
nice one. not much of ryhmeing but it was really good. love it! |
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