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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
this is about a guy i think im in love with ______________________________________ i feel under your spell cant you tell? i dream of you your not right for me or so they say you do drugs and drink your out with a blink i really want you your just too cute! your a bad influence we both know it i want to change you make you come clean make you sober make you beam if i tried would you hit me? would you hurt me? i loose myself in your eyes days could go by do i have a chance? do i really want you to answer that? should i ask? |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Well, i say don't try to change him. Wait till he does change on his own then tell him. Otherwise things will get messed up. Great poem and glad to see u back...haven't seem u here for a while FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
i think you should just ask him to change but if he doesnt want to then. just drop the subject. He should respect you and at least try to. But if things dont work out o well. your poem is really good i like it |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Great poem! My advise? Well don't hang out with his group unless you want to become a addict to. But try to be an example to him, be his friend, then ask questions. Get to know him, (warning about this part: if he's honest you WILL fall in love with him) Answer his questions, or let him get to realy know you (thoughts emotions ect.) Then ask him to change. Above all go slow, to have maximum effect you want him in love with you before you ask, and not just 'in lust' with you either. I'm not entierly sure it will work, but it's what I would do in your shoes. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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LittleWillow Member
since 2007-12-27
Posts 54 |
This exactly explains why me and my ex broke up. =] Well done and great chioce of words. Really made me remember the memories. Well done =] xxx |
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