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Letting go #2

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Falling rain
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I'm sorry guys before i messed up in writing this poem cuz it was my first time posting on here and i was excited and in a hurry to see how people feel about my poem. So i am writing how it is and how it will stay lol

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Tears running down my face

thinking of you

Walking in a steady pace

Trying to start anew

Your death was a giant blow

I'll never forget your face

But in my heart i'll always know

Your love left its trace

My hands are shaking

But i dont know why

But your new life

Is the sky

Your never ending love

Shines down on me

Like the wings of a dove

Is now set free

My heart has moved on now

So goodbye and farewell

I loved you so much

I bet you could tell

[This message has been edited by Falling rain (02-03-2008 12:04 AM).]

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love the orginal and love this.. just as good as the first i think.. keep the poems comming..
Much Love,
Jess
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jees this is the origianal. the one before was not complete and this is the actual one that i wrote. so yeah but thanks!
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zach this  is great  love it!

~-Keagan-~

 
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