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It’s so Confusing that it’s Simple. . .
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It’s so Confusing that it’s Simple. . . |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
It’s so Confusing that it’s Simple. . . It’s much too simple to say Words just don’t justify The things that you should know That are apparent in your life Don’t you wish you were here I know I wish you were It seems life is spinning And the details quickly blur I want so bad to scream To shout and make a scene But that would be improper So instead my anger weans I wish for you to do something To express your thoughts in words It would be nice to know You think of me more than I’ve heard So we’re following the path I choose You never wanted it all The only thing you want is me And that may be your fall I’m not quite who you think I am I think I’ll disappoint The idea you have in your head (I think) will make my point But oh how I want your love How I want to know you care It’s what my world revolves around- The hope that you’ll be there and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
That was beautiful. I understand the emotions of this poem and how it could be experienced...if that makes sence. I love what you said in the last stanza, it really struck me. Great job. FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Yeah...great poem. (sad smile) I realy liked this part: I’m not quite who you think I am I think I’ll disappoint The idea you have in your head (I think) will make my point Exelent write. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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