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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24

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0 posted 2008-02-01 12:29 PM

another day
another struggle
helping one friend
but lost the other
living wit misery
living by desire
but w/e i see goes in the fire
delaying wrath
still walking thru my bristled path
i lay and await my future
that already crashed
im just walking thru another day
struggling to get away

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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1 posted 2008-02-01 05:13 PM

thats a really great poem. I understand compleatly! ...Fantastic.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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2 posted 2008-02-01 06:19 PM

Nice work. Cant wait to see more of your work!

rebelangelv
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3 posted 2008-02-01 07:13 PM

wow uve really been improving lately

another day
another struggle
helping one friend
but lost the other

that is an awsome line. rhymes pretty well too

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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4 posted 2008-02-02 03:34 PM

WOW this has got to be one of my favs by yooh.. great write

Krysti

justanotherstorm
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5 posted 2008-02-02 09:31 PM

thnx ppl

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