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Teen Poetry #8

Illusionary

Ian L.R. Sanchez
Junior Member

since 2007-07-05

Posts 16

0 posted 2008-01-31 11:33 PM

Things only one man can see,
They appear right in front of me.
What is this I am seeing?
Imagination? Reality?

Wondering around as the birds sings,
Deafly hearing the bells that rings,
Staring at something that is too fine,
And not knowing the pain crawling in my skin.

Both my mind and heart combine,
Still have things that I can't find.
Not seeing the light that shines brightly,
Because my eyes are just too blind.

Day have passed and I found out what I see,
It's not reality but illusionary.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-01-31 11:48 PM

Great write Ian. I can understand what this poem means. An exelent description of some of the most annoying things in life.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-01 05:45 PM

this is good. i like it. keep up the good work! =]

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-02-02 03:24 PM

oh WOW this was a great poem the flow was good.. as were the words hope to read more soon
Krysti

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