The Bitter Taste of Silent Screams

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Teen Poetry #8

The Bitter Taste of Silent Screams

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-01-31 07:50 PM

Achign inside with pain hidden
deep, no one can see what I really
feel; they just turn away. Turn ashamed
of what they assume of me, I'm
just here by myself not caring.

Consumed by there disapointment shimmering
so bright, sitting in the middle of
all this insanity. They trample me
along with my life, not caring for my screams.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (02-02-2008 01:03 PM).]

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-02-01 11:06 PM

Heya Em Sweetie.. Love this poem.. it rocks.. As for a title.. Silent Screams Too Damaged To Be Heard or The Bitter Taste Of Silent Hurt

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-02-02 01:02 PM

wow, you're good at that! now all I have to do is decide which one to use! maybe I'll mix them up a little...thanx for you'r help Jess!!!!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (02-02-2008 04:12 PM).]

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-02-10 10:09 PM

By the way...it's supposed to say
"AchING inside with pain hidden deep..."
sorry about that, my friends pointed it out to me but it is too late to change it. But oh well...k bye!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-19 05:43 PM

Always release the Pain within!

Thats what I say

ARCTIC WIND

Life isn't just given to you
Life is about Creating it ......
-Arctic Wind

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