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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2008-01-28 02:54 AM



Everytime I talk to you
I can't help but think it's wrong
but then when I don't
my days seem so long

I want to be the person
that you want me to be
but I have a bpyfriend
and it's not that easy

I want you bad
yet I still love him
and I don't know you much
or that if you're just a whim

I want to get to know you
and I want you to know more about me
but I don't want to ruin anything
I want you to be truly happy

So until then I'll keep holding on
wearing my heart upon my chest
and wait for all eternity
to find out the rest....


~I know not one of my best... If this ain't sooo writers block I don't know what iz haha
Krysti~


© Copyright 2008 Krysti - All Rights Reserved
Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
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1 posted 2008-01-29 05:33 PM


I admit it needs work but even so it was really good.

any how hearts are things that shouln'dt be poked and proded but let to decied the fate of mortal men, and love.

Hugs, Abbeon.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

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