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Elias Nevermore
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since 2007-11-03
Posts 152


0 posted 2008-01-27 08:38 PM



Is something wrong with me?
Why do you avert your eyes?
Aren't I standing in front of you?
Do you think nothing of the past?

So many time you have passed by
without even glancing at me.
Should i assume that you have forgotten
who i am or who you were to me?

Tell me please what has changed.
My mind has found no reason for it.
Please tell me the truth of this
so I can someday learn to bare it.

Was it that day, that infamous day
when my world was shattered in an instant
because I let you delve into my soul
and see into my heart's one desire.

Now I am but a fleeting memory to you.
I am invisible to your harsh eyes
since I was the one who sought love
that you denied in that moment of time

"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All

© Copyright 2008 Author Andrew E.L. - All Rights Reserved
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2008-01-27 09:53 PM


oh oh oh oh i'm soo sorry. i know that place and it hurts, but like scabs, all wounds heal over time.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
2 posted 2008-03-08 08:11 PM


but some of them dont heal and u still remember the past
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
3 posted 2008-03-09 09:26 PM


true- but everyone dies at some point

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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