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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
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Neverland

0 posted 2008-01-26 12:58 PM



I have no more tears, I don't know how to cry. I've bottled them up, saved them for the sky. One
day I'll let it all go, everything I've held on to; I'll let it show. Everyone seems to hurt me, at
least 1 person cares. But I don't know who they are, or why they aren't here.

I can't seem to say the truth, what I'm really thinking. I always turn away, this is you'r doing.
You left me when I was young, left me in the cold.
All by myself, no longer bold. I wish to be brave again, to trust who I want, only you ruened my chances of that when you and mom fought.

Every one says that I don't understand, but what do they know? how do they find the courage? Let all the love in they can, not fearing one thing, while I try to block out everything.

Terrified of love, thats what you did to me. How can I live without being free? Now my heart aches for someone to care, but feeling this way wont get me anywhere. Cursed by you'r being, now scared to trust and love, how can I live? how can I love?

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2008-01-26 03:00 AM


Emily.. I have a rather jaded relationship with my father also as u may have seen in some of my poems.. Its a fathers job to stuff up i think all do it.. sometimes the scars are far to deep to be healed i know mine are.. but you need to find trust within yourself without allowing all the bad stuff consume you.. Its easier said than done.. I've been there.. but i have an awesome friends.. some only know me through here and through my poems but yet they are by far the best friends i have.. When things get tough it's easier to let them take control but when you stand up to those fears you get the greatest feeling in the world and nothing can top it..

You are a talented writer and a fine young lady.. I believe your destined for greatness.. and I'm here for you.. you only need to email me.. i won't let you fall i promise..

Luv,
Jessica

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
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Neverland
2 posted 2008-01-26 03:20 PM


Thanx, you don't know how much that means to me right now. Thanx for the wonderful comments also, it helps

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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