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shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-01-25 08:06 AM

she looks carefully all around her
her black eyes mimicking the darkness
deep secrets lurking within her soul
there's no where to run, no where to hide;

she's stuck in this dark abyss

clutching her heart in her hands,
she tries to run but trips;
falling over stones and rocks
collapsing in a heap of forrbidden anger

her heart escaping into this dark abyss

she sheilds the world from her heart
too late; the secrets are already pouring out
she tries to catch them as they drift farther from her hands
no use now; they're too far

they've been enveloped in this dark abyss

now that all she has is lost, she'll sit and cry
waiting for someone, something that will never come back

[&] she's a blood broken rose

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-01-25 03:09 PM

Your poem has triggered some realy deep thoughts. Thank you.
Isn't it strange how creul we can be? I am in awe of people who can reveal secrets and live with no mask. I realy try to but I can't quite seem to do it. Your poem truly hits on why most people don't try, we hurt people horrible rats that we are! Without even trying we let others hearts fall into a black abyss!

Execellent write.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

2 posted 2008-01-25 05:17 PM

Thank-you for the comment. I am also envious of people who don't live behind a mask. I'm one of those people who can't trust many people and do live behind a mask. I only noticed how cruel some people are until I actually sat down and thought about it. So, I decided to express my thoughts in the best way possible. A poem, of course!
TJ

[&] she's a blood broken rose

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2008-01-25 07:27 PM

I really liked this.. it's nice to see new faces.. and i like your style deff. unique..

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

4 posted 2008-03-24 05:28 PM

Thanx for the comment.

TJ

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

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