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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-01-25 06:03 AM


Ok.. So i wrote this poem in fear that my "Special Sum1 wouldn't reply but he did so i'm happy.. Anyways i loved this poem n i thought it was a good write from me.. so this is for all the girls who get there heart broken. (I didn't lol)

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Measure Of A Man


This time I laid it all out
Put my heart  on the line
I try to convince myself it’d be worth it
That what i did was fine

But instead you broke me in a million pieces
You overlooked what was really there
The words “I love you” didn’t mean a thing
God dam it!  Life just isn’t fair!

You could have just commented anyway
Said “Good write or well done”
But instead you found another poem
Because hurting me would be fun

So I’m done waiting for you to say it
Because I know it’ll never be true
So I’ll just drink my sorrows away
Because it’ll be take me years to get over you

She was just another aussie battler
Whom for you, she fell
I guess she should have known
Loving you wouldn’t end well

She’s too good to be forgotten
So she won’t put up a fight
Cause it took the measure of a man
To destroy her world tonight

© Copyright 2008 A Typical Aussie Chick - All Rights Reserved
wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US
1 posted 2008-01-25 08:33 PM


this was amazing i loved it.

-jenna

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
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2 posted 2008-01-28 01:43 AM


awee hunn this wuz soo sad... try not to think of him anyway he doesn't deserve a gurlie lyke yooh..
HUGS
Krysti

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