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Teen Poetry #8

No longer in your arms.

Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

0 posted 2008-01-22 07:46 PM

Silver tears mixing with the fallen rain,
Twisting the memory of your charms,
The release of bitter torments of pain,
The falsehood of your arms.

The way you looked at me,
As if you did no wrong,
But past your deadly lie I see,
And shut are my ears to your alluring song.

In my ears still echo tho, the whispers of your lie,
The hollow emptiness of words you said,
Thoughts of love carried on the winds sigh,
But leaving pain in its stead.

I see you as you truly are,
Twisted and alone, lost and a far.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

1 posted 2008-01-22 07:57 PM

this had someone what of an odd flow but thats what made it great. amazing write.

-jenna

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-01-23 01:05 AM

ohhh beckie loved this sooo much you rock!!!!! miss you tons hunn
Krysti

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

3 posted 2008-01-27 02:38 AM

thank yo i umm well im new to anything writen that rymes and is'nt about death, rape, or war so i think i did good.
well thanks

Abbeon.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

4 posted 2008-09-24 02:36 PM

you did extremely good...i hope you keep writing more like this

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