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Teen Poetry #8
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LOSTinTHISworld
Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2008-01-22 02:13 AM


never really liked the way
we crossed our paths on sunday
and you never tried
will you
do you
ever lose control

so i hide the fire in my eyes
only show you my disguise
never will i
let you
see me
losing control

its all about everything
that comes around
within and without

so i change my path next sunday
try to call its quits to this pain
i will say goodbye
how do
you feel
knowing i have let go

its all about everything
that comes around
within without

didnt really like the way
i passed away this sunday
and you never cried
will you
choose to
say goodbye
or will you
choose to
hide in diguise
just like i

memento mori

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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
1 posted 2008-01-22 06:39 AM


i liked this alot. good job.
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