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fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
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0 posted 2008-01-21 07:27 PM



Red petals adourn my path,
but wait a minute let's do the math.
one plus one equals two,
me and you not a third taboo!
Scented candles light my way,
The same sweet stench from your one night lay!
A little love note was displayed,
"I LOVE YOU" was written and a heart around it was made.
oooh how sweet this deceit!!
when the words come from people who cheat!
But I made it into a million peices,
just to remind you your the dirt in feces!
the white teddy with bouquet in hand.
was massacred first and then canned!
No wooing or gluing can fix this heart of mine,
Not even your famous "I'm so sorry" line!
So leave me alone,
you have made me stone!
Stay far away,
I will never,forgive how you can lie and betray!

© Copyright 2008 NRomero - All Rights Reserved
Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19
Posts 232
NJ, USA
1 posted 2008-01-21 08:02 PM


haha! i like it! its kind of sad but in a cute rhymey way!!! it mad me smile! =)
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