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Relo
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since 2008-01-03
Posts 10


0 posted 2008-01-18 12:38 PM


A little bird whispers in the ear
Gossip spread the pains, joys,and fears
It's a virus commin after the soul
Watch the monster devour them whole
Transformed into what many despise
Then take some rejection with a confused surprise
An angry beast unleashed on the innocent
All started on words of false pretense
Accuse the innocent of what you've done
Look in the mirror only able to run
Scared of the truth, Complacent with lies
Intervention comes, the cure hurts the most
Deal with your fears, your demons, your ghosts
Then as all the emotions erupt
You can stop it all if you JUST SHUT UP.

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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
1 posted 2008-01-18 01:50 PM


wow. this style was diffrent in a good way. i liked it alot and i enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing.

C.O.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
2 posted 2008-01-18 05:28 PM


woah- sweet . . . i loved it. it had a Je ne c'est quoi feeling about it.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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