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Teen Poetry #8

Remember my name

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

0 posted 2008-01-17 09:20 AM

it needs a bit of work but yeah

your holding hands
i can't understand
this life for you not me
play each others song
your life goes on
ill just stand here and wait
you run to me at the beginning the middle and the end
I fix the fights
create your tearless nights
and still i stand and wait
I watch your happy years go past
live in each others arms
then you ask the question everyone does
where is your shining sun
i do not know i can not tell
this question comes from hell
never had a valentine
im the one thats left behind
while your off in your love struck world there's just one thing on my mind
one thing that I'm still looking for
one thing I can not find
a girl that can even remember my name.

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

Talyn
Junior Member

since 2008-03-09

Posts 47
North Carolina, USA

1 posted 2008-03-10 12:38 PM

I think everyone feels like that sometimes, to me a face and gesture are easier to remember.. doesnt mean I have forgotten who you are.

Lovely Thank you for sharing.
Talyn.

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-03-10 06:50 PM

thanks talyn that comment means alot

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

3 posted 2008-03-11 12:19 PM

I have been forgotten a few times then remembered again but with lateness trailing...great job on this poem as you can see I so relate

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-03-11 09:28 PM

Enjoyed your thoughts

ARCTIC WIND

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2008-03-12 01:21 AM

wow i absolutley loved this!!!! just the flow the words amazing write hope to read more

Krysti

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

6 posted 2008-03-12 03:12 AM

thanks fm2u happy and sad you can relate at the same time. cheers arctic. thanks krysti glade you liked it

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

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