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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-01-14 06:57 PM


bite your tongue
so you dont speak
just sit in silence
week after week

well im so sorry
you cant bleed through me
dont give me all these things
you want me to be

dont try to change me
take me as i am
im not the best person in life
but im doing what i can

the shambles crack
and the words come free
heres all you've ever
wanted to say to me
lay it out
for all to see
just dont forget
you cant bleed through me

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2008-01-14 07:12 PM


ummm orange, beautiful, and we all feel this, i think men more sepcifically. i think it's almost in men's nature to not try to change women- knowing how much they hate that themselves, but nice write i enjoyed it, and i'll say it again, it really is nice to see you around again.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Jaki H
Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232
NJ, USA
2 posted 2008-01-20 11:59 AM


i like it!
hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
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3 posted 2008-01-21 12:26 PM


im not the best person in life
but im doing what i can

Wow dude!!!!! amazing poem guud too see you back on the front pages again missed u greatly
Krysti

fromme2U
Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

4 posted 2008-01-21 03:46 PM


There is nothing more to say but that you are an amazing poet!
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